Sunday, November 1, 2009

Mirror Of Truth Comments

Rating: 4.5

What is seen in the mirror is nothing more than a person with lies and hate.
With sadness and traits
of discrimination and disgrace.
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That all makes so much sense. I relate so much to this poem, it's like I can look in my mirror and see others who are feeling the same way. I feel sorry, because I know that it times of feeling such pain, it's an excrutiating and trying experience. I hate it, and I would hate for anyone to have to go through it. But it makes an amazing poem.

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Allan O 06 November 2009

emotional..this writting shows more of you than did acid tears..it's more proclaimed and heart felt...it tells others of your emotional concerns...as for a mirror of truth i feel the mirror is simply a part of another person staring back at me...either saying this is it..or if you watch long enough..telling you this is not what i will simply become.... thanks Dee ~^..^

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Eyan Desir 04 November 2009

Sad but well expressed..good job

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Marieta Maglas 02 November 2009

nice philosophical poem....it is hard to find the mirror of truth.........10

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