Saturday, June 8, 2013

Mirror, Mirror Comments

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Rainfall, lightning, thunder, sun
Condense gems which ocean shun
Greetings geese, planes goodbye
Friends I loved, friends they fly.
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Danielle Mari Nidea
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Zubiya Surti 08 June 2013

this is beautiful! the last stanza is too good! the movie life of pi has some very beautiful shore scenes

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Gajanan Mishra 08 June 2013

Let us go towards non-existing shore. I like the poem. thanks. I INVITE YOU TO READ MY POEMS AND COMMENT.

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Ramesh Rai 08 June 2013

Mirror, mirror, of the sky Sea of which you go by I row my boat forevermore To find the non-existing shore. xlent. superb

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