Friday, December 30, 2016

Mirror, Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.4

If I were a galaxy in outer space
and wanted to find my reflection,
a mirror I'd seek so to peek at my face
while engaging in introspection.
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Harley White
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Captain Cur 23 March 2021

A stellar ending to this galactic write! Artfully created interplanetary and philosophical musings orbit around each magnificent line. A wonderful read and I will be (exploring) more of your work!

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Seamus O Brian 25 February 2018

I came across one of Bill's comments on your work, which led me here. This is, indeed, a finely tuned and skillfully honed work of writing which is a delight and pleasure to read. I look forward to rummaging through more of your pieces. Bravo, good poet!

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Harley White 25 February 2018

Thank you very much for your words of praise and encouragement! I’m pleased that you discovered my poetry and I appreciate your reading and comments!

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Bill Cantrell 30 December 2016

The Cheshire cat looks through a black hole at this poem with amazement, beyond the event horizon a reflection cannot return an answer, wow! ! Your poem is both intellectual and masterfully crafted! ! Well done! ! !

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Harley White 31 December 2016

Your astute and enthusiastic remarks are truly gratifying to me! I am so pleased that you realized the amount of work that went into writing and researching the topics. Such appreciation makes it really feel worthwhile! Thank you, Bill Cantrell!

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