Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Mirror, I'M You Comments

Rating: 4.0

you are my altar ego
and you are mad like me.
Mirror, you are mad.
You smile, I smile,
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Neela Nath Das
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Kay Staley 21 October 2014

Hey I really liked this one actually. Its not what I would consider my type of poetry, but it was enjoyable because of the topic and simplicity that actually hinted at something deeper and darker than it sounds. I dont actually know what you wanted the reader to think about this one, but that is kinda the beauty of poetry: that each individual person will get their own idea of the words and apply it differently to themselves.

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