Mirror by Brandon
Death on the brim of non-existence,
Life the fruits of our labor,
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This read was a bit difficult because it was sometimes a first person read and sometimes a third person read. It actually went back and forth on this. This reduces its focus and effectiveness. It probably needs a close rewrite by the writer. Otherwise, the mirror aspect is fine. GW62
Hey this one is good..effective write actually...well expressed indeed...and thoguh said in first person..it does arouses our mind's eye..a thought provoking one....and i the image of Mirror is ideal for your purposes..nice write 10+++