Mirror Comments

She looked in the mirror and she saw her eyes... they bore the reflection of the blue skies... she saw something, like a wing now nothing could hold her down she broke the string.. to fly away, to have some fun to laugh at the world, to kiss the sun to glide through the sickle moon to keep flying, not to return any soon.......... wow is the word for your poem......

Very reflective poem-please excuse the pun-it's always nice to see the depth of one's very being beyond the image in a mirror.

i like this poem you truly expressed what was inside your heart, your heart and your soul

Call me Talk to me As the butterfly Dance As the rose Scent As the nightingale Romance Look at the flickering light in the mirror Wipe the tears, fears Love Shines out

I really like the way Elizabeth wrote this. She has a real good style for writing poetry and I hope she doesn't stray too far grom iy. She can say whatever she wants to say with this style. GW62

The first poem hits the bullls eye.An excellent work with words as you express your feelings it carries the reader for more my 10