Tuesday, January 23, 2018

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I've watched you grow up through the years.
I loved it when you came to visit all those years ago;
pulling funny faces, stretching your face in all directions to
make a face even sillier than the last.
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Caroline Noonan
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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2018

A very passionate piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Caroline.

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 January 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Caroline. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2018

Loved reading this pragmatic write! I quote a few fascinating lines of your poem. “Your youthful glow and taut skin were a wonder to behold/You still painted your face, only no longer with pictures of unicorns..Thanks for sharing. You may like to read my poem ‘Ode to My Conscience’. Thank you

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Caroline Noonan 24 January 2018

Thank you for taking the time to read it :) I will look up your poem ‘Ode to My Conscience.’

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Frank Adie 23 January 2018

This is a very emotional poem. It clear depiction of hour time changes things for man and leave us with longing and memories. I urge you to keep writing.

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