I loved you once, you took me in
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you seem to b pretty careful with the rhymes...it lends a beautiful beat to the poem when 1 recites it... i liked this 1...
Great imagery and style. Where were you all these times? Anjana
mirror reflect your body image and this poem reflect your great thought.
The imagery is just perfect woven around the theme. I feel you have immense talent and you should write more often. Waiting to read more of your works.
With grey hair I thought wisdom come Grey hair did not make wise some Wisdom gained, I found me failed Oh! Mirror, can you make me resolved AmmA the great feel make us in its love and emotion
Pasanna>>>A very melodious work....Structured tight & crisp....rhythm & rhyme pattern metered nicely....Solid work, Pasanna''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR