Mirror Comments

Well written, thanks for sharing.

My plain love and heart Was simply taken as my naïve part You never asked who I was, never I never told you who I was, never I warn you with my hidden tear.....The real me..... i see in this mirror. a philosophical write. tony

A riot of emotions touching both head and heart. Is there a way out from a chaotic feelings? Leave to to the readers. It struck me whatever I read.

You never asked who I was, never I never told you who I was, never I warn you with my hidden tear My fevered pride is a fear - Seeing my real me, real I. philosophic and spiritual. tony

Very intense. The repeated never brought my hair on my arms to rising- there is a feeling of something coming and it is a fearsome mixture of pain, pride, fear, and regret. Well done, Hassan.

A beautiful poem of love, pain, pride, fear and regret. Very well written Hassan! ....10+

An intensive write with thoughtful penning. Touching expression. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

A thoughtful and well wrote poem. I recollect Queen Noor JehaN Az qaza aayeenae chiny shikast, khoobshud asbabe khudbeeni shikast.

I appreciate your attention Bernard

Hassan, such a good poem...10+++