The used rags of my ancestors,
do not make me, me.where's
the adolescent I saw
yesterday? has it drowned in you
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Nor the ancestors, nor adolescence and other memories make who you are today, if you are looking in a mirror. Both the ancestors, and adolescence with other memories make who you are today, if you are looking in the mirror of your mind.
Aloha yoonoos... Cheers... and yes, a fine revealing wright...something about thought building prose... oh yea... off with the beard! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
The reflection in a mirror is ever changing as we age but it can't reflect our inner attributes but it can reflect our emotions in our eyes! Fascinating and great write!
Mirror reflects the exact figure of the person or thing. Here you have discussed the places that are deeper than the mirror image. Beautiful poem.
have I the right to see my entire being. The mirror regretted it can see only the front.
Thank you, for the invitation to read your poem. Indeed, true beauty is inner beauty; or, happiness looks good in the mirror.
Depth in the poem. Seems like what I was saying in my 'mask' to some extent.
Hi Yoonoos, I take it that the above poem is the one you intended for me to read in your personal message and invitation which you indicated would be of interest for me to read. Well, I definately liked it as it seems to come from quite deep within you. Great piece of writing!
Yes! ! ! ! ! What time has sequestered Useless for the expansion of self essence Wound in the ecstasy of the unknown Gosh Powerful! ! ! It's the being, being in different to hurt or to be hurt This is true freedom penned by someone who knows there true essential nature. Mindful only of the courier inside.That which does not change. You made me smile with the touch up uses for the fast fading face. Brilliant poem.thanks Yoonoos you are such a gifted poet
I love this poem for discussing the places that are deeper than the mirror image. It helps us think about an image that we have overused. This is a great way to think about the metaphor and the self. Thanks. I learned a lot from this poem, especially because I came to it wondering what was there to say about this metaphor.
Sometime reflection in a mirror is two person one is your partner, and you already becoming one reflection when the mirror is broken the other can reflect.