Mirror Comments

An excellent poem with mirror! 10+++

Ahamad, Great repetition. I like how you pointed out how we seem to be prisoners of the mirror. I like the fact that you kept the beat of your poem. Good job! Warm Regards, Starrbox =)

WE CAN TELL THE MIRROR THAT WE LOVE OURSELVES, THAT THE REFLECTED IMAGE IS OKAY AND THAT WE CAN ACCOMPLISH ANYTHING, BUT YOUR POEM HAS JUST GIVEN ME CHILLS. YOU EXAMINE, YOU ASK THE RIGHT QUESTIONS ALWAYS. YES, WE SHOULD BE ABLE TO LOOK BEYOND OURSELVES. ACCEPT OURSELVES, YES, BUT MOVE ON TO WHAT AWAITS AND TO THOSE THINGS AND PEOPLE AND CREATURES THAT NEED OUR STRENGTH AND GOOD WILL. THE ONLY BEAUTY THAT MATTERS IS THE BEAUTY OF SPIRIT WITHIN US! KUDOS TO YOU, SIR. CAROL