Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Mirror! ! ! ! Comments

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Mirror I love thy not for u show my true face,
Gone are those days when u were mine,
How can I forget those moments when u showed glamour?
Now with my creeping age you are apathetic.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mark Dillon 09 January 2016

Yea, time does that lol good writing.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2016

Thanks much for honoring my request. I really appreciate your comments.

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Manonton Dalan 22 November 2015

time does change how we look and maybe feel

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2016

Thanks much Manonton

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 01 September 2015

Change in age has been portrayed beautifully.Keep it up Asim Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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M Asim Nehal 29 November 2015

Thanks much Col Khalid

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Soul Watcher 01 September 2015

You nailed it Mohammed, I liked your diction.

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2015

Thank u so much....

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David Wood 29 August 2015

Mirrors are there to condemn us as we get older but they never change or lie. Lovely poem

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M Asim Nehal 29 August 2015

Thanks much for honoring my request.

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T Rajan Evol 27 August 2015

Wonderful poem to read on this subject MIrror.

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Kelly Kurt 25 August 2015

The mirror becomes our nemesis as we age. Nicely written, Mohammed

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Sanjukta Nag 25 August 2015

awesome concept.loved it. depicting a great philosophy of life. thank you.

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M Asim Nehal 25 August 2015

Thanks much...

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