Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Mirror Comments

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Do not gaze upon me with judging eyes
there’s a contradiction with in the lies you call truth
open your mind, to be blind no more
I see it in your eyes that even
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Kelvin Owusu
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$arah Pillai 09 July 2013

very nicely done! ugly is not external as you may believe that was really good and I wish more people would understand how much truth that one line says

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 June 2013

Strong poetic expressions! Well laid verse.

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