Friday, April 26, 2013

Mirror Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am your faithful friend, I cannot lie
My silver charm waits upon your desire
As I stand and wait patiently for you.
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David Wood
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Craig Moses Uche 26 May 2023

It's very beautiful sir. I would have loved it if a rhyme scheme was part of it like the 'Ballade of Modest Confession' by Hilaire Belloc. Good work though

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Mohammad Muzzammil 21 May 2023

This poignant poem captures the essence of a mirror's perspective, symbolizing a faithful friend.

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 January 2023

Love this David x 5*****

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Rob Lamberton 15 January 2023

Thanks for taking a deep look into the mirror. Quite the reflection! ! 5*****

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Bharati Nayak 12 December 2021

I will always be here for you, waiting. My silver charm just a reflection Waiting to make your day seem happy.-----We often look into the mirror for reassurance.

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Chinedu Dike 09 November 2021

An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched....

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me poet yeps poet 10 January 2021

5 stars thou

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me poet yeps poet 10 January 2021

through me, as if, as if. As if you wanted three times older 2013 version may lke to minimise if it does you please

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 December 2020

I am tuthful and I can't lie.... this candid expression laudably articulates the personality of the poet. A very nice work... loved it.5 stars

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Anjandev Roy 27 December 2020

Magnificent write....

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 December 2020

I am your faithful friend, I cannot lie My silver charm waits upon your desire As I stand and wait patiently for you. i cannot life says the mirror. wonderful.tony

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Varsha M 14 December 2020

Yes I felt I have read a verson of mirror somewhere which touched my heart so deep yes... Your poetry reminded me that mirror of Sylvia Plath. Your poetry has that tinch. Thank-you.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 December 2020

My silver charm Is just a reflection Faithful Beautiful poem which mirrors truth

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Chinedu Dike 11 December 2020

An insightful poem nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind.

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Dipti Deori Borah 22 December 2018

Mirror...... Wonderful one...

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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 October 2015

I know the feeling, well.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 October 2018

I’ve read this piece again. .... it is so very true.

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Pamela Sinicrope 17 September 2015

I thought....WOW! How does this MAN understand how women feel about their mirrors? How perceptive you are. This is a great gem of a poem. Sylvia Plath....after I read her book when I was in college, I didn't get out of bed for 3 days.... Bravo on your poem.

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Liza Sudina 02 September 2015

You are like an angel in this poem! ! ! unbelievable! I look back at you Without wondering, without comment And I am truthful; I am your faithful friend.

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M Asim Nehal 28 August 2015

Wow, Wonderful Poem. I liked it. I invite you to see my poem Mirror. Thanks.

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Dr John Celes 22 August 2015

'silver charm' well-written for the cause,

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