I am your faithful friend, I cannot lie
My silver charm waits upon your desire
As I stand and wait patiently for you.
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This poignant poem captures the essence of a mirror's perspective, symbolizing a faithful friend.
Thanks for taking a deep look into the mirror. Quite the reflection! ! 5*****
I will always be here for you, waiting. My silver charm just a reflection Waiting to make your day seem happy.-----We often look into the mirror for reassurance.
An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched....
through me, as if, as if. As if you wanted three times older 2013 version may lke to minimise if it does you please
I am tuthful and I can't lie.... this candid expression laudably articulates the personality of the poet. A very nice work... loved it.5 stars
I am your faithful friend, I cannot lie My silver charm waits upon your desire As I stand and wait patiently for you. i cannot life says the mirror. wonderful.tony
Yes I felt I have read a verson of mirror somewhere which touched my heart so deep yes... Your poetry reminded me that mirror of Sylvia Plath. Your poetry has that tinch. Thank-you.
My silver charm Is just a reflection Faithful Beautiful poem which mirrors truth
An insightful poem nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind.
I thought....WOW! How does this MAN understand how women feel about their mirrors? How perceptive you are. This is a great gem of a poem. Sylvia Plath....after I read her book when I was in college, I didn't get out of bed for 3 days.... Bravo on your poem.
You are like an angel in this poem! ! ! unbelievable! I look back at you Without wondering, without comment And I am truthful; I am your faithful friend.
Wow, Wonderful Poem. I liked it. I invite you to see my poem Mirror. Thanks.
It's very beautiful sir. I would have loved it if a rhyme scheme was part of it like the 'Ballade of Modest Confession' by Hilaire Belloc. Good work though