Friday, February 10, 2012

Mirror Comments

Rating: 3.6

Oh! Mirror the most loveable, cunning queen
You reflect in mostly whatever you have seen.
Face is the mirror of the soul
Literature is the face of the society as a whole
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Abdul Wahab
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Mohammad Skati 15 August 2014

It's nice, but it's too much exaggerated.

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Savita Tyagi 16 March 2012

Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading it as well as your other poems.

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Lusekelo Simwela 15 March 2012

always wanted to write somethng about a mirror, thot of writn sth like that michael jackson's song, now there is there is this....i hve given up...excelent poem!

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Daniel Warner 09 March 2012

This poem shows how much sense you make out of life, so much dexterity in the rhyming.This is a mirrored masterpiece considered to the many other poems you have created.

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Richi Levis 02 March 2012

It is a lot of sense in this poem.

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Natalia Sozh 01 March 2012

Well done, Abdul! There are deep thoughts and I liked the form, too. ? mirror is really a misterious thing, isn't it? Especially with women. I also have some poems about mirrors, but written in Russian, my native tongue. Good luck and inspiration to you! Larisa Ladyka

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Joey D 01 March 2012

very noce poem I enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work

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Pheko Motaung 19 February 2012

A lovely poem and a fabulous read.Thank you very much

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Danny Draper 17 February 2012

Abdul. I assume other than some self loathing that the mirror engenders in all of us the reflection issue is a metaphore for unrequited love. Interesting theme.

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Loves Crushed 14 February 2012

wow that was a vary cool poem i loved it

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Hans Vr 13 February 2012

Wow, Wahab, This a very nce poem. I think it goes really deep. Often we feel the fire of soul burning inside but through years of conditioning we have learne not show it on our face. Physical fire so easy for the mirror to reflect. Soul fire, so difficult. I really think you touched here in a very poetic way the issue of us hiding our positivity while easily showing our teredness and distress. This is at least my interpretation. I thoroughly enjoyed the poem 10

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Harindhar Reddy 13 February 2012

I really appreciate the way you have started the poem by good metaphor ha ha you compared mirror to the cunning queen! I really enjoyed reading the poem. God gives life to man and man gives life to many things. Here you gave life to mirror. Mirror is personified! I hope the mirror should come alive to read a poem on itself by a quality poet like you. For poem A1 rating and to you - a loud Cheers!

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Harindhar Reddy 13 February 2012

Wahabji, What splendid start to the poem Oh! Mirror the most loveable, cunning queen. I am elated to know you the hidden story under this satirical poem......... I like this poem for it bares the soul of the poet. I got to rate this I give this poem I will A1 rating To A loud cheers! ! !

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Shahzia Batool 12 February 2012

very lively poetic composition to the mirror...the object amazingly personified n apostrophized...as the cunning queen...the rhetorical questions are the soul of the poem...beautifully composed! ! !

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Nadood Al Nasser 12 February 2012

me: mirror, mirror on the wall who makes the biggest point of all, who has written a great poem for all? mirror: abdul wahab is the man for all

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Jonathan De Vocht 11 February 2012

Great Poem! Keep up the good work!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 11 February 2012

For long time I thought that I am a good worker, in reality the bosses did not want to acknowledge it, because they were not as good in work. This mirror story is similar, you know your worth and your beauty of your soul, but somehow your subconscious do not want to accept it. Relax, let go, first you have to love yourself as YOU ARE, not to criticize, but bless every part and when your subconscious believes, you will find the mirror good also. Anyway I will put in my poem in about to love yourself first.

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Humayun Kabir 11 February 2012

I appreciate it but brother neither I'm a poet nor a good reader.. But keep it up.. I respect you and all the poet..

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Francis Tikava 11 February 2012

I like this poem. You get the feeling that there is more than one layer present here. It's very good. Could you read my poems? The Latest is Eight Legged Messiah. Would appreciate any comments you have to make.

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Philip L Ward 11 February 2012

Hi abdul, This is very deep and addresses confidance and self analysis. Its interesting and clever of you to use the mirror in this way. It is well written with good content. I enjoyed it. Kind regards philip Ward

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