Mirage Surprise Comments

The mirage of a wet road, a rainbow in the sky, the horizon above the sea, our eyes give us so many illusions and surely beautiful they are. The poem is well written. These things make me sometimes question, what the astronomers are seeing, how many of these things are plays of light and how many of these things are solid facts.

An amazing poem indeed, it really pictures the experience and is written wonderfully thank you for a great poem.

That picture really capture the illusion created by the mirage, and way you write it it just like a diary of a traveler sharing the experience, and has some interesting lines that make the write beautiful :)

A creative and compelling composition that is both rich and refreshing like a oasis!

Beautiful poem. .... ray of hope glimmered... Nice line Thought expressed well.

A wonderful beautifully crafted write on nature. Fascinating lines that drew a reader to go through with this profound piece of work. Very well presented. Enjoyed reading it.10

Nature is full of surprises and so is this poem. I like your poetic style. Factual and poetically inspired.++10

this mirage makes me think/interesting ideas are woven all through/glad to ponder on/

Amazing word sketch of a natural phenomena we call mirage. Nicely captured first-hand images. Awesome write. Thank you, zaynab mdm.

Such a wonderful poem...10+++

Quite a phenomena! Nicely written! Thanks for sharing!

A divine light trick of sun rays Ah, all the phenomena He created lying there waiting to be appreciated. Gleaming glinting puddles in the midst of the road all the way till we reached our abode. nature and its wonders and the percieving eye of the poet..... thank u for your great power to perceive and to put in verses.. tony