Mirage Rocks Shadow Dancing Poem by Terence George Craddock

Mirage Rocks Shadow Dancing

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in hot summer shimmer shadows waving heat
mirage rocks are shadow dancing to hot sun beat
afar rocks on fairway are obstruction indiscreet


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Thursday, December 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mirage,shadows
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Split image from the poem 'Summer Shimmer Shadows Heat Rock Reality' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
Written in January 2016 on the 1.1.2016.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 01 January 2016

tHERE IS A CREATIVE TENSION HERE BETWEEN PURELY mental constructs of mirages which offer no obstruction and realrocks which both are and are an obstruction. And we humans are notm esponsible for wither one, we are the witnesses not the creators. Our participation ismsummedmup in the poemwhich is also a mentalconstrut.

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