Friday, October 21, 2011

Mirage Of A Mother Comments

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A phantom affection, a thing of the past
What you care for, made of glass
Living a pathetic, poisoned, parody,
Your love, a screaming melody
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Joyce Rugg
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Tiffany M... 20 June 2012

I absolutely loved the imagery and metaphor! It sounded really unique, and you did an amazing job of portraying your pain and memories in a poetic way (I bet you never would've guessed; your poem sounds poetic! : o Haha) I really like this, and I'm sorry you had to go through something like that...

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Georgios Venetopoulos 03 June 2012

I salute you through this and sympathize. I liked your poem. I also wish the best for the two of you. I want to be your friend. Definitely! :) Hugs! Giorgio

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