Tuesday, March 31, 2020

Mirage And Oasis Comments

Rating: 4.8

How happy am I to meet you
Here in this desolate desert,
An oasis will be to me this spot;
I can wide open to you my heart
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Revisiting this marvelous poem. Very inspiring.

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In love there is always oasis. Love does not recognize the state of bleak and dismal emptiness. A beautiful poem of love and hope.

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Thanking you more and more never reach the brim of satisfaction for such is your co-operation and appreciation

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 November 2021

A marvelous poem of love, hope and perseverance. Magnificently expressed and crafted. Liked the closure lines. Very inspiring. To my Poem List.

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Anjandev Roy 17 July 2021

Excellent piece

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Thank you very much Dr. Dillip. When we feel too much dependency on God all negative experiences will seem to be a path opened by Him to lead us to ensuing achievements

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2021

Every mirrage seems to be thy footprint... so tenderly expressed with fathomless poetic depth. A marvelous little poem. Love is expressed at its best. Top score!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 April 2020

Love has no barriers or boundaries. No difficulty or strain even to tread a desert terrain. Every mirage becomes a footprint kindling hope. Beautiful poem on love with amazing metaphors........10

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Thank you very much Geeta Menon. Love is such an irresistible emotion that can thrash any obstacle in its course and reach the goal. Special thanks for the comments in the metaphor

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Every mirage seemed to be thy footprint That kindled hope to reach you soon.... beautifully penned

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Thank you very much Pathakji.We have to take every adversity as an inspiration to our goal

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Bharati Nayak 10 April 2020

I didn't feel at all any strain To tread along the desert terrain watching your footprints yonder: Every mirage seemed to be thy footprint That kindled hope to reach you soon. - - - - -An amazingly beautiful poem of love.

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Thank you Bharti Nayak for this beaming comments. Love is such an emotion that it really make the lovers feel everything easy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 April 2020

A marvelous poem of love. Love has its own course. It can conquer the unconquerable and can equalize humanities. A poem of great depth that captures the very essence of love.

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Thank you very much for the delightful appreciation. Real love, whether it is for a person or God/Goddess is irresistable and cannot be suppressed, wherever we go we carry it with us

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Savita Tyagi 02 April 2020

Beautiful poem. Without hope of love we could not survive the harshness of life. Every mirage seemed to be thy footprint That kindled hope to reach you soon. lines worth remembering.

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Thank you Savitaji very much for the words of encouragement. Love, whether it is love or devotion, cannot be suppressed

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 April 2020

This is the type of poem everyone would like to read again and again. Deep and touching. Very well crafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you very much dear AKP. What you said is correct, love is a subject of human interest always and hence the number of readers can be high. Our prayers for cvecoming the hazards of The Corona Days is much significant.Wish yoy perfect health and peace.

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Valsa George 01 April 2020

Love is a compelling force that makes us do the impossible! An ardent lover will even dare to pluck the moon from the sky to satisfy his beloved! Think of mothers who are ready to forgo their lives for their children. Here is a lover who doesn't feel the hazard of crossing a desert for his loved one. The very memory of her is like an oasis to him. Beautiful enumeration of the power of love.

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Thank you very much dear friend Valsa George. The force of love that tends to undertake adventure is really our life force that takes us across many impossibilities. Love can be a forceful devotion to meet God Almighty too. Hope and wish you and all around you a safe ferry across the Corona Days

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 31 March 2020

the title in itself is a poem of several nuances

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Thank you dear friend Yoonoos Peerbocus. Let us pray for a safe landing across the Corona Threat

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 March 2020

An endearing poem with rich poetic beauty! Fascinating opening stanza! Loved reading this magnificent poem sir.......Full marks

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Thank you Dr. Dillip for such a comment that boosts inspiration and creative attitude. Let us pray for ferrying us across The Corona Days safely.

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