Mirage Comments

Well conceived and nicely brought forth with insight. A good creation. Thanks for sharing Sase.

Nice sketch.Lovely poem I enjoyed it.The poem deserves full mark 10+++Thanks for sharing.

green lake, the cake, rose bed, I came to know Things which I thought was true wasn't true. the contrast of a cup of brue.. hot.... with the mirage very fine was it............u use the literally technic of the use of contrast very well. thank u for this poem..

Sometimes it is hard to distinguish the real from the fake ones around us. Beautiful poem, written with so nice rhyming.

It fell on my feet Finally on feeling the heat I came to know Things which I thought was true wasn't true Our world is full of illusions. You have nicely decorated this lovely poem with your wise choice of words. Thanks dear poet for the sharing. 10+++

Such an interesting poem....10++++++

Things and beauty you see in this material world change frequently due to impact of time and illusion. Night reflects illusion too. Running behind matter is a mirage. Wisely penned poem is shared here.10