Sunday, August 24, 2014

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In a hot summer day,
The restless clay,
Desires of an evening,
In a nearby park,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

Wonderful poem for grand children. Very true said, this is the beauty of life. Free of hate and of strife. Loved reading each lines. Thanks for sharing with this lovely poem.

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* Sunprincess * 26 August 2014

...........a wonderful poem for your grandchildren....loved reading every line....adding to my favourites...

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Amitava Sur 25 August 2014

A lovely imagery with lots of love and affections, keeping the soul enthused with joy and delight, energize the life to walk on further ahead..

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Ruma Chaudhuri 25 August 2014

Its an excellent poem. I always love to read your poems. These are so natural and smooth that we can easily see the events. It came to mind like a movie. I love to read your poems.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 August 2014

Father or Grandfather is like a peasant, seeing the yield they are the happiest on earth lovely thank you so much

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Valsa George 25 August 2014

How a grandfather longs for an evening to spend in the company of his grand children and watch them play! But unfortunately they are miles away..... and his mind longingly and lovingly flies to them! It is a moment that gives new dimensions to his life and he basks in those sweet recollections! Lovely! !

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 August 2014

A painting of a Grandfather whose Grand Children are away, in rainbow colors.

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