Thursday, February 27, 2014

Mirage Comments

Rating: 5.0

moonlight's shadows on bats' wings
in the sky the stars abound
but keep me busy so many things
my eyes are stuck in ground.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Lorraine Colon 27 February 2014

Everything must be done in its proper order - work and duties, then romance. Nice poem.

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