Friday, November 4, 2011

Mirage Comments

Rating: 4.5

Mirage, mighty men have fallen for the pursuit of your beauty
Induce me not to hope for you, for I've no such hope. If you wish, then,
Renege on the oath of your father, O angelic daughter of the Devil
And we shall be real for each, not madness of the eyes.
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Akhtar Jawad 21 February 2015

An impressive poem...............................

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Richard Blay 04 February 2015

Thanks Shania. Thanks Chinedu, and I'll definitely spend time on your poem.

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Chinedu Dike 04 February 2015

A poem that depicts vain glorification of beauty and its consequences. A nice poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Shania K. Younce 30 March 2014

This is a fine poem. Bien!

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