Mirage Comments

In brevity, this poem holds much truth. Thanks for sharing.10+

I like this Vaibhav I think you have a natural talent to create a poem like this,10.

wonderful poem, lovely to read.........10+++++

by its reeking reality and reverberation.........wonderful phrasing, exceptionally brilliant thought. i do admire giving u 10++, thanks for sharing

Well conceived and beautifully narrated!

Dear, dear, dear you are not suggesting that politicans are full of B.S. tut, tut. it's a 10 from me

Vaibhav, your write is true, politicians love to blanket us with miasama. Well done. regards Bob

very great thoughts very meaningful...flowing with depth really brilliant thoughts you shared here very dignified, my friend 10+++ lovelots, Maia

hey...man honest....where u learned to write like that... its actually very very good Far on the ringing plains of windy Troy. I am a part of all that I have met; Yet all experience is an arch wherethro’ Gleams that untravell’d world whose margin fades For ever and forever when I move. How dull it is to pause, to make an end, To rust unburnish’d, not to shine in use! As tho’ to breathe were life! Life piled on life Were all too little, and of one to me Little remains: but every hour is saved Ulysses Alfred Lord Tennyson cheers and ten

excellent, compact poem vaibhav, all said in four lines! i really enjoy to read, what you think.great poem. ritty

a beautiful construction.10 shan

your poem conveys well the concept you bring inside...10

it is a short and strong poem.

Unsaid truth amounts to falsehood. Telling lies amounts to cheating. This is a great piece in few words. Very well written Vaibhav.

so much said in so little space.....insightful poem......

Your idea always reaches into the very depth of the soul, Vaibhav. This poem has a spirit of Percy Bysshe Shelley and a thought from very powerful mind in it. The more I read, the more emotion I get from it. Thanks for sharing :) Amary.

excellent- a great insight into life. say so much in four lines 10 Mamta

Well done! This is so true and your carefully selected words work so well. Top marks Karin Anderson

The four lines tell the whole story. CP

'When the face of truth gets blurred'.What an excellent way to define a mirage.10, for you. Kind regards, sandra