Wednesday, December 5, 2018

Mirage Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are so far, my dear
With ocean between us today.
To be near and close to you,
I meditate a thousand years.
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Sreelakshmi Revikumar
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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

What if you are my dream? Or am I a stranger to you? Unknown, to the universe Known only to you, Are you a mirage, I wonder.... ...I like these beautiful line

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 22 February 2019

Mirages makes us feel something which may not be possible in real life. Whatever comes unexpected could be considered as a mirage. I feel delughdel to hear that you have enjoyed my poem dear Prabir

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Srijita Mondal 15 February 2019

Very beautiful poem..Love is always spiritual..when Love deepens it becomes Worship..Longing is very beautiful part of Love..it strengthens Love💚 Your poet's note is also very nice 💛

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 15 February 2019

Dear poet, it's so nice to hear from you... Equally happy to know your thoughts on love

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 February 2019

A nice poem, Sreelakshmi. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar 15 February 2019

Dear poet, I feel happy to know that you took the time to read my poem. I'll read yours and let you know about it soon.

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Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Sreelakshmi Revikumar

Kerala, India
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