Sunday, October 11, 2020

Miraculous Eternity Comments

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Behind the white clouds berg
the dawn sun is smiling

By spinning of the earth
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Terry Craddock 28 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Who Can Catch A Blue Pearl Spinning Through Time? ' inspired by the poem 'Miraculous Eternity' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE and dedicated to MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2020

No one and nothing is everlasting Nowhere the everlasting is existed Beautiful lines to sum up everything.5**

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Terry Craddock 12 October 2020

'Behind the white clouds berg the dawn sun is smiling By spinning of the earth the daylight is wearing veils' exquisite I can get lost in these lines

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 October 2020

thank u sir for reading so many of my poems and commenting openheartedly thanks again sir

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2020

Veils! ! ! ! Realms of realms! ! ! ! ! ! Spirituality! Able to gain salvation. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 12 October 2020

Another wonderful poem by Mahtab Bangalee

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Varsha M 12 October 2020

Though two ends of continuum yet always found together one being initiator and the other the Terminator. Good conceptual expression.

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