Miraculous Eternity Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Miraculous Eternity

Rating: 5.0


Behind the white clouds berg
the dawn sun is smiling

By spinning of the earth
the daylight is wearing veils

Darkness is playing by the name of night
where knowledge is imperceptible knight

I'm losing myself and everything
in the dungeon point of soul destination
by seeking the lost beginning

No one and nothing is everlasting
Nowhere the everlasting is existed

But the birth and death-
the name of miraculous eternity


11.10.2020 Chattogram

Sunday, October 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 12 October 2020

Though two ends of continuum yet always found together one being initiator and the other the Terminator. Good conceptual expression.

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Kostas Lagos 12 October 2020

Another wonderful poem by Mahtab Bangalee

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Terry Craddock 28 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Who Can Catch A Blue Pearl Spinning Through Time? ' inspired by the poem 'Miraculous Eternity' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE and dedicated to MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2020

No one and nothing is everlasting Nowhere the everlasting is existed Beautiful lines to sum up everything.5**

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Terry Craddock 12 October 2020

'Behind the white clouds berg the dawn sun is smiling By spinning of the earth the daylight is wearing veils' exquisite I can get lost in these lines

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 October 2020

thank u sir for reading so many of my poems and commenting openheartedly thanks again sir

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2020

Veils! ! ! ! Realms of realms! ! ! ! ! ! Spirituality! Able to gain salvation. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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