Friday, July 17, 2020

Miracles In Progress Comments

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Naughty monsoon
Has arrived in Delhi.
Look how it blows bubbles
Into the huge sky;
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Rajnish Manga 18 July 2020

Yes, this is enchanting, Bubbles of clouds floating in the sky and playfully creating bizarre images to be erased the next moment, then, again creating another set of fluffy images. This is an ever-changing exhibition on the canvas of sky goes on for those on earth. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2020

You have captured a beautiful imagery of arrival of monsoon. Weather is cloudy and cloud draws amazing scene of funny pictures. This poem is excellently penned with beauty of nature and monsoon's arrival...10

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 July 2020

Much awaited joy captured in playful word. Loved reading it.

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Sharad Bhatia 17 July 2020

Such a beautiful poem." Naughty monsoon" . Thankyou for sharing M'am

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