Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Miracle Of Love Comments

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Alas! He could not lick his head,
He was hit at the head by a cruel devil,
His master planned to shoot the dog,
The loyal pet was then in peril,
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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2017

Love - a voyage of pure bliss, that sets everything is its wake. Lovely narrative piece with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Jawal.

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Khalid Saifullah 05 December 2016

A great message of love.............................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 December 2016

Very nice story narrateed in heart touching manner regarding love among dogs and men. The child and its mother has compassion on pet. Marvellous poem. I The lines impressed me are...TThe dog was sitting with a female partner, And she was licking the head of the pet, Then came a day the couple at home, Where there is love everything is set.... Thanks for sharing.

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