Miracle Man Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Miracle Man

Rating: 5.0

He had a heart attack at forty-four,
a massive one that should have left him dead.
In thirty years, the man had had one more.
'A wonder he's still here, ' the doctor said.

He was a smoker when the first one came,
but never smoked again beyond that day.
His doctor said he couldn't be the same
as he was before, and expect to stay.

In hospital he saw a shining light,
and there were people there to bring him home,
but something that he said to them that night
convinced them that his time had not yet come.

At eighty-eight, he's on a bowling team,
and bound to live forever, it would seem.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a true story that I wrote about my brother-in-law. The poem took third place in the sonnet category of the 2024 Arizona State Poetry Society contest. It is published on page 146 of their book Sandcutters 2024.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 28 February 2025

So very well written and felt. Long reaching in teaching a story with life lessons, deep insight into life, itself.Good show!

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Smoky Hoss 28 February 2025

Ahhh, so bowling is the secret to long life! ! !

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Belle Wassermeister 21 January 2025

A wonderful sonnet about your brother-in-law! Congratulations on third place in the contest!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 January 2025

A great depiction of a wonderful life. A lesson on health worth to ponder about. Beautiful poem as always. So well crafted and executed. Congratulations, Kim!

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