Miracle-I* Comments

Translating a piece of art without affecting the original essence is not a servile imitation but an effort of re-creating the work -and the translation of a poem into a poem keeps the original flavor-Amjad Islam Amjad himself is a master-hand in the composition of vers-libre in Urdu, near-justice is done to him!

Heart begs but can’t weep the tears that were to collect the slipping scattering sand give life to it, irrigate it they didn’t flow ...reads as if from rehan...as a translatoe myself i feel pretty at ease with this piece...it does read original, rehan...

Like the message and tone in this. Good imagery Rehan. HG: -) xx