Tuesday, July 11, 2006
Minutes Before He Closed His Eyes Comments
Rating: ★3.5
Minutes before he closed his eyes
He stared at the wall
Looking at the wallpaper full of pies
He could taste the sweetness of life
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Francesca Johnson
11 July 2006
Extremely moving, and not a little bit frightening. You've described someone's last moments with reality (I think) , and compassion. The last part just blew me away. Keep writing, Diana. Love, Fran xx
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8/2/2025 2:59:21 AM # 1.0.0
very touching.. it msde me glued to my seat till the end and slided away the earth beneath my feet.. marvellous.. regards, krishna