In my room, I talk
to my invisible guests:
they do not argue, but wait
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Wonderfully penned with great insight into one of the problems associated with our global society. There are very few who desire to service others. Keep writing! Congratulations on winning " Modern Poem." : -)
Everyone understands Mother Theresa; her guests die visibly in her arms. the mother of the poor.. tony
Great poem reflecting the bad happenings going on in this society. You are really concerned about it. Thanks for sharing, Loved it.
Fascinating poem that seeks to look beyond the intransigence of habit, belief and custom; towards a greater sense of self awareness.
Wondrous the world rules Tribe and ethnic groups, The minority slowly getting die Oh news is alive for the rich and superpower But the saint Mother has a womb for the whole world without racism....
My CONGRATULATION for this most touching poem goes too to the family of the late great poet. May he R.I.P.
Most beautiful tercets, amazingkly composed. CONGRATULATIONS for being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Aptly worded and I have read this amazing poem with greatest pleasure. A 10 Full Score.It's not the mythology or the marriage customs that you need to know, It's the will to pass through the eye of a needle to self-forgetfulness............................So beautifully thought and written! Amazing poem.
Polish up your alien techniques of observation, while the city burns... Beautiful
A very powerful observation on our society ridden with many social evils. Thanks.
cryptic and elusive, I can attempt to interpret it in anyway, but the language and thought is a maze of complicated turns. I will definitely put this to my favorites for a reread. Well chosen for poem of the day.
An intriguing poem with lots of colorful possible interpretations. A well deserved modern poem of the ay.
I lack the means to change their amiable ways, although I love their gods.
A beautiful composition has been made on community culture having touching expression. Brilliant one.
so heart-touching so heart-touching and so heart-touching poem really we, the so called civilized peoples do not understand the MINORITY
He has nicely pointed out the community culture men stick to ever in life despite changes outside world! nice composition to read and share! Thanks!
I will have to read this cryptic poem, probably in a state of solitude, again and again because I am not in possession of the necessary knowledge that will open this to my understanding- - I would hazard the ghosts of superstition leading society astray?
For being minority, the heart survives in burning fear! ~