Tuesday, September 10, 2019

Minor Morning Key Comments

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Brain cloud morning disrupted
grey thorn hills look stocky stubborn
wall myrtle grey edging line dry stoned
rhymed boarder to keep out wolves
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Andy Brookes
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Bri Edwards 30 November 2019

line 1: i know you meant Rain, but you are always thinking (good things) about ME...and my name begins with " B/b" , so you inadvertently typed " " Brain" . Right? ? Mornings! ! Ugh! ! and sometimes evenings are WORSE, knowing morning is coming too soon.; ( bri :) p.s. i " don't get" the title...& a 'few' other parts. love-making caught my attention!

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