Tuesday, March 22, 2016

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It's been something of a while
since I tumbled down
out of the warmth and darkness
into this bright uncertain space.
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Robert Charles Howard
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Timothy Mcpoetry 22 March 2016

Thank you Robert. Another crafty bit of imagery. Bravo!

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Robert Howard 22 March 2016

Whoa guys, it's a just baby of unspecified gender in a crib with arms and legs flailing in joy recognizing his or her mother's love and returning it the best way it can - with a smile.

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Jack Meoff 22 March 2016

Yeah, I agree, I got some sexual undertones from reading this poem.

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Timothy Mcpoetry 22 March 2016

Is this dirty? Because, I feel like it could be interpreted as being dirty... Just sayin... Any insight to your creative process is appreciated. Kudos to you, fellow poet! Poem on, my fraternal comrade!

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Robert Charles Howard

Robert Charles Howard

Wyandotte MI
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