Mini Earthquake Experiences Comments

What a frightening experience. Thank goodness only a small as you say mini quake. We all know how deadly the big ones can be. Well written, felt like I was experiencing the quake through your words!

An interesting experience, as earthquakes always are. I have lived through many minor ones.

loved the details--'Got flipped off the page again===I love the details you used to describe the mini earthquake! 5 star

You describe the experience perfectly. I have experienced a few quakes in North America, and I can attest that the earth does seem to'waltz'. An terrific verse!

Your poem has a very good subject, I enjoyed

I felt a few small quakes, you feel helpless, A tornado hit our home years ago,

I think i just erased a comment. I like a lot of the poem, but would make some changes, and i had some difficulty understand a few parts. The rhyming there was was enjoyed. i liked 'trivial tremor'. bri : )

I THINK most people i U.S. would usually use 'everything' and 'everyone', not 'every thing' and 'every one'. But maybe i'm in the minority, or would be in some countries. : ))))))) bri

I like 'trivial tremor'. I did not figure out you meaning here: 'The lil horrors over so I cast humor's wig.'

very well written.

Earthquakes are a nasty experience, you captured the effects very well.

A well expressed poem that resonates with me.

A vivid portrayal of a deadly earthquake. It expresses in detail the experiences of someone who is faced with a great peril.

You have captured the panic an earthquake can trigger perfectly. Excellent poem

simple prefection Bravo! Encore! Encore!