Mine Will Be A Lonely Funeral Comments

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it touched my heart. You really did a great job by writing this poem since it shows what happens when one dies, a lot of people would opt not to write about this topic but you wrote about it. I really enjoyed it.

This is a great poem, it is filled with imagery and emotions. I was touched while reading this poem, you really did a great job with writing this poem since it describes what happens when someone dies.

They will lower my pine box into my dreaded sepulchre And the pastor will have his share of words to say But he'll just do it for the Lord for he will not have known me..my death, my funeral procession and my life in the grave. you have great imagination to write this my dear poet. thank u for bringing in the emotions of a death and final bye. tony

A good start with a nice poem, Sitali. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

You know what you....this is a good poem

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth from the heart. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Sitali.