Sunday, October 12, 2008

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Lay with me under the stars.
Be with me under the moon.

Promise me a forever within a lifetime.
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Alexander Hale
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Brian Archibald 09 November 2008

Aww, this made me smile, very good use of words and quite powerful for being a shorter poem.

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