Monday, November 24, 2008

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Rating: 4.6

i have a poem
her every line
starts and ends
with words that are divine
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Tareq Jalabi
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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 October 2010

I accepted the word 'pin' as was your purpose anyway.

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 December 2008

really a poem you should be proud of..very sweet....paint a vivid picture of her beauty...your piece is sparkling like pin that everybody have seen...

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Samantha Gaona 02 December 2008

this is a great poem, i love how you connected it all so well, its amazing!

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 28 November 2008

Great poem! I really enjoy reading it.

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Min Sia 27 November 2008

So sweet! What a lucky woman! Great write! Bravo!

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Blue Eyes This poem is easily read and understood just how you feel and am sure the person you have written it for would love to read it too. Karin Anderson

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Amanda Shields 25 November 2008

aww..this is so sweet she must be a very lucky woman...keep up the good work

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Yasmine Torres 25 November 2008

OMG that so sweet You must really love this woman :) so cute

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Elena Winters 25 November 2008

her being the poem.......that was a clever idea great job

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Nikki Clevenger 25 November 2008

Very good poem of your beautiful woman. I would say a love poem.

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Monlano Kim 25 November 2008

Aha! At last something open and not heartbreaking! Keep it up!

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Marria Attar 25 November 2008

Very Nice Poem...something new

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Raheel Rabbani 25 November 2008

hay it is very good I like it v much

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

wow bluey, nice poem ooooooops the diamonds in that pin hurt me toooooooo .....10 regards anjali

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Joseph Poewhit 25 November 2008

Some girl - VODKA time

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So sweet i love how you spoke of her.. Very detailed i love it.. Great work krista

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