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I accepted the word 'pin' as was your purpose anyway.

really a poem you should be proud of..very sweet....paint a vivid picture of her beauty...your piece is sparkling like pin that everybody have seen...

this is a great poem, i love how you connected it all so well, its amazing!

Great poem! I really enjoy reading it.

So sweet! What a lucky woman! Great write! Bravo!

Blue Eyes This poem is easily read and understood just how you feel and am sure the person you have written it for would love to read it too. Karin Anderson

aww..this is so sweet she must be a very lucky woman...keep up the good work

OMG that so sweet You must really love this woman :) so cute

her being the poem.......that was a clever idea great job

Very good poem of your beautiful woman. I would say a love poem.

Aha! At last something open and not heartbreaking! Keep it up!

Very Nice Poem...something new

hay it is very good I like it v much

wow bluey, nice poem ooooooops the diamonds in that pin hurt me toooooooo .....10 regards anjali

Some girl - VODKA time

So sweet i love how you spoke of her.. Very detailed i love it.. Great work krista