Saturday, May 12, 2007

Mindstorm Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind raging in my mind
Carries words and feelings and thoughts
They burst through my bones and skin
Released in a tangle of knots.
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Maureen Travers
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Olabode Oluwatayo 15 May 2007

'The wind rage in my heart... The rain pouring out of my eyes' A highly metaphoric poem! Jaunting the mind to imagination! Excellent Work! Maureen! 10 for this!

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