Friday, October 30, 2015

Mindful Comments

Rating: 5.0

They say my heart is a wild creature
Hence it is behind the rib cage
Then why my thoughts are let free to float?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Manonton Dalan 22 November 2015

beautiful mind.... I love it

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T Rajan Evol 31 October 2015

Really mindful poem many questions will remain unanswered. Loved it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2015

Function of mind is broad and wide It can hold, produce, and reproduce And command all body parts.....true dictum, so nicely depicted. It is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.......10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 31 October 2015

verily, the flight of mind is amazing crossing the seven seas and skies. a lovely poem indeed

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Chuy Amante 31 October 2015

hold and reproduces yeah, the brain anyway... Produces? If is only a chemical machine something much more grand produces the Creator shall we say? lovely thoughts it's wonderful to express thoughts of the heart and mind the left and right a balance, onemess

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Sanjukta Nag 30 October 2015

Function of mind is broad and wide It can hold, produce, and reproduce And command all body parts. This is the most valuable realization. Very wisely written poem. beyond rating.

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Kelly Kurt 30 October 2015

a wonderful and fun poem. Thanks, Mohammed

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Loke Kok Yee 30 October 2015

everything is in their right place that's why writing poems you're an ace Thanks Asim-10+++

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Ari Alsio 30 October 2015

They say my tongue is sharp and they say my heart is a wild creature - and they say that it is a very bad combination... Thanks M A N

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