Monday, November 23, 2020

Mind Your Business Well... Comments

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Lassitude rule my upper story
With its best efforts to comply
Replacing all hopeful moments I ever lived
Only viewing darkness so prevalent.
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Varsha M
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Dipak Adhya 24 November 2020

Life is indeed a valuable treasure...one should careful of it.... Certainly you are of that kind...God must give you more to write and realise such thought.... Congratulations! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 23 November 2020

Making a mind strong...well written

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 November 2020

Life is a prescious treasure Making it meaningful is all our Submitting to wild cognitive bull In no sense makes a wise call. /// wise thoughts written about the life and its achievement thru realistic struggle

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Rajnish Manga 23 November 2020

Martial arts of mind I call Blocking all thoughts harmful.... //.... Thanks for the poem and the Notes. It is a known fact that we all create and develop our own defence mechanism through with we protect ourselves from physical and mental onslaughts as much as possible.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 November 2020

Amen. You said it. The war is in the mind not in reality. Right?

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