Saturday, May 20, 2023

Mind Undermined - A Satirical Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mind, once sharp and clear,
Is now clouded with doubt and fear.
It used to be a powerful tool,
But now it feels like an old, worn-out mule.
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Sando Hussam
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M. Asim Nehal 22 May 2023

All politicians do the same after loosing their elections and they go deep down to dig their own grave. Nice Satire using self to bring the facts of those unfaithful leaders.

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D.N. Rebb 21 May 2023

I truly love this poem. But I don't get the satire part, these are really powerful words

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David Wood 20 May 2023

Keep cool and calm SH as a rampaging mind knows no wisdom.

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Rajan T Renganathan 20 May 2023

Hope it/ he/ whoever recovers well and soon. Great satire on every mind working towards distraction/ diversion/ division.

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