Wednesday, January 2, 2008

Mind Under Construction Comments

Rating: 5.0

This mind is under construction
Malfunctioning due to stressful imagination
It gave me trouble sleeping
It postponed my good ol' night dreaming.
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Kestrel Quiambao
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Mary Gordley 02 January 2008

A well written poem, with a great deal of interesting ideas. You are a young man and the most important thought was the one you expressed in the very first line of this poem. Your mind is still under construction, but you are the architect, therefore there is much reason for hope. You have the power to attain anything you wish. Life is ahead of you!

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