Monday, October 9, 2017

Mind The Sailor Comments

Rating: 4.4

Mind is sailing through the ocean of life
Tireless journey till the last breath
Working for the body day and night
Engaged in sewing the dreams and
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 November 2022

Yes, you are absolutely correct. The very first line is the precious substance of this wonderful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2017

High tidestides and low tides! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 15 October 2017

Thanks for your comment Edward Rini..

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Nosheen Irfan 10 October 2017

A beautiful poem on the journey of life. It's not always a smooth sailing. Well penned.

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Rini Shibu 10 October 2017

Thanks Nosheen for your comments

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Lamar Cole 09 October 2017

This is a great inspirational poem.

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Rini Shibu 10 October 2017

Thanks for reading Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2017

Tireless journey of life till the last breath is realized and this is true. In this ocean of life mind sails the boat carefully. Brilliant idea is shared in this poem...10

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Rini Shibu 10 October 2017

Thanks for your lovely comments

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Kostas Lagos 09 October 2017

Mind, the good old captain! Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing

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Rini Shibu 10 October 2017

Thank you so much Kostas.. Rini

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