Mind's A Parachute - Ii Comments

Nikunj, your poem reminds me of a book on cognitive therapy and the title is 'Feel the fear and do it anyway! ' Gradually one is encouraged to open new horizons slowly at first, until like your poem 'a parachute is like my mind, it works well when it is kept open''. Throughout the poem your imagery is brilliant and the last stanza romps in the kudos you so well deserve. I love it all and whatever you have done to improve it, has worked brilliantly! 10 love Karin

excellent. nicely written. beautiful expression.

Imprisoned, confined in the harness and lines This poem has such amazing metaphors yet their brilliant and weird at the same time keep it up

mind...i think is a subject we can complete on...your take on it is lovely in a parachute....10

no one can fully write about human mind, for it keeps wandering and never lets us complete... this is a beautiful poem.. can be added to one of your best list

a poem about human mind shall always be incomplete. A 10.

a very good comparison pointed here between a parachute n a mind... well done sorry i ws quite busy with other stuffs so cudn give much time to this page... don worry i don forget to read my friends' poems.. shall definitely read when a bit free.. u keep going with this good work.. :)

Nice! You touch on certain moments and feelings that we all can relate to. I had to look up in the dictionary what 'firmament' means. It meant expanse of the sky, the heavens. Your poem taught me a new word today! :) DC

excellent write nikunj ji.......imaginative....10

A very good write at least on two accounts. First, the poem relates to human potential which is virtually unlimited. But more interestingly the poem reveals the floating joy of a liberated mind which is awesome.

amazing write -10 anjali

Amazing Imagery, Inspiration as overcoming our problems as well. Very well done.

It is nere really complete. This is a wonderful expression of our inner most demons and an understanding in order to overcome them we need to take aleap of faith and know that the 'chute of hope will be there for us tttttttTTTTTTTen