Mind Of Summer Moon Comments

Stunning seasonal poem exquisitely penned for the senses. This one goes straight to my favorites. Thank you Luo.

This poem is so classical in its traditional esthetic of the evocation of the seasons. The first line especially blows me away with its melodic onomatopoeia. Just a lovely embodiment of the sense and sentiment of the words and their meaning. Unfortunately the near perfection of the opening proves a hard act to follow for ensuing lines, which just miss their marks with slight stuttering frailty. I wish I had a command of Chinese so I could compare the flow and particularities between the two. Overall, a stunning piece (in English, at least) .