Monday, October 26, 2009

'Mind Laser 26/10/2009 Comments

Rating: 3.0

Focus strong, mind a thin line, think of
my documents all the time, not allowing
thoughts to run away, no feelings disturb
the surface of my life
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Margaret Alice
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Linda Ori 29 October 2009

Obvioiusly a multitasker, and very effective at doing so. It's not easy to maintain focus on the mundane world, when the inner child is itching to run and play. This poem puts that into perspective in a very interesting way. Nicely done!

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Margaret Alice

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Pretoria - South Africa
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