Mind Knot (1) Poem by Cheska I.
Mind Knot (1)
'Aren't you just letting yourself drown? '
'Aren't you just embracing what's thrown at you? '
'Aren't you just letting yourself stay sad and down? '
'Aren't you just embracing being blue? '
My mind is filled with endless questions
Questions that only roams around
Around my mind as it slowly
Slowly meeting its own demise.
I wish all the thoughts could just shut down
I wish all could just disappear
I wish I had words to describe how I feel
Cause it's getting tiring
Heartiest congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
You conveyed the feeling of depression in a short verse.
A well conveyed poem of the day. Truly touching. Congrats on your featured piece...5 stars*****
A poignant piece written with clarity of thought and mind, very heartfelt with strong emotions....
exquisite poem full of rhetorical questions and inquisition. Congratulations well deserved.
Questions that only roams around Around my mind as it slowly Slowly meeting its own demise.....wonderful expression! Like this poem filled with infinite inquisitions!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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My mind is filled with endless questions Questions that only roams around Around my mind as it slowly Slowly meeting its own demise.......excellent poem penned on the variety of mind; mind is the colorful no shape biological existence of human body; human thoughts are varieties; it varies man to man, place to place, time to time; great poem penned; congrats for being selected this poem as POD; deserves 5****