Mind In A Mirage Comments

'wholly sacred lines touches the essence of peace...your poetry squeezes the tiptoe of our emotion...thank you and God bless

So true, with wonderful lines, great write!

just a modernist play of words, very stoning to the heart and it tickle to the mind....so beautiful God bless 10 /10

Straying for a thing within ourselves. That's is full of rethink. Good poem.

Dear Vikrant, this poem is the product of a clever mind. it shows that you can write shark and great works well done.

a strong word is used in the last line, but peace can't be contained in our hearts only and it can't be found in our mind only with out the help of others, so we have to be peaceful to ourselves and help maintaining the peace of others. Searching is not wrong and no one is an idiot to look for peace outside, from where they can get the inspiration to be peaceful, as peace is not permanent! any way quite interesting your poem!

this is excellently written. this certainly calls us all to a place of being sober as we approach life, well done! !

Mind is struggling through many vivid images between surreal background and colors, till sometimes we thought its real but if we look deep and understand what it talking and showing, we will master the rules_Soul

Yes, peace resides in our mind. We have to explore it.Very nice and true thought.